What do you think of this Warrior Cat Idea?

Monday, July 26th, 2010 at 6:17 pm

I am writing a fanfic about Heathertail’s point of veiw. It takes place somwhere between the last bookof POT and first book of OOTS. How do you like this for a beginning?(I am going to write a prolouge, too…)

Heathertail leaped of the fallen tree. She landed with a small thump. Her gaze flickered around as she padded into the clearing. Thunderclan cats were chatting among themselves, but now that Windclan arrived, they spread conversation to them. Heathertail spots a golden pelt. Lionblaze! All of a sudden, Heathertail becomes shy. Lionblaze was sitting with a she cat she hardly recognized. His new mate, she thought. She was desperate to talk to him, even with a new mate. Trying to be confident, she padded to him. Relieved, she realized who it was. It was Sandstorm, his kin. Lionblaze started padding of into a new direction before seeing Heathertail.
“What do you want?” Lionblaze hissed, though she thought she heard a pang of hope in his meow.
Heathertail looked at her paws. She didn’t know what to say! Just then, Breezepelt came over. He licked her coat and smiled. Turning to Lionblaze, he squinted his eyes. “What do you want?” he hissed.
“She came up to me to talk!” Lionblaze said quietly. “We were having a simple conversation.” Lionblaze turned to Heathertail. “Go on?” He said annoyed.
Heathertail looked up to face Lionblaze. “Um, how is the prey running in your territory?” She asked, though she felt ashamed to not have enough courage to say what she needed to say. Breezepelt was sitting with her! She couldn’t!
“ Fine, thank you.” Lionblaze said as he turned to walk away. While Breezepelt turned away to talk to Foxpaw, who was cleaning her fur, Heathertail turned around and whispered in his ear, “Meet me in the tunnels.” Lionblaze froze.

Is it too dramatic? Any more changes I should do? Rate it on a 1-5 star scale, please.
ALSO- Poll- Should Lionblaze and Heathertail be together?
what’dya think of the name Cave Of Lies? because it will have to do with the cave they use to meet in.

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2 Comments

Animalover says:

July 26, 2010 at 6:17 pm

I think it was really good and Lionblaze does hate Heathertail, he just doesn’t want to kill her! So you where right.
Yewly says:

July 26, 2010 at 6:17 pm

I think it was awsome and dramatic, but:
1) Heathertail hates Lionblaze.
2) Vica Versa
3) Breezepelt gets Heathertail

Rate: 4 star

Poll: No.

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